Failure project.

I think I really failed, more like BOMBED, the NARRATIVE PROJECT. It was weak conceptually and aesthetically
here are some ideas I could use to re-do it.
my problem was that it was hand drawn - so maybe I might re-do it using media like imovie or something. It might be nice if it was animated. I think i might keep the same idea i was presenting but present it in a different way.

Strength